11-16-04 | 10:35 a.m.
waitin4summa
Name | waitin4summa
Title | The Shattered Hopes and Dreams of Krystle
First Impression | Yay for the color blue. I like this color. The image bothers me a bit, but I‘ll touch on why later. ||3/5||
Template / Layout | Like I mentioned above, I like the colors. They make me happy. I dislike the image only because it looks so crowded with all the text on it. I also kind of dislike the way the links worded. It can tend to be confusing sometimes. Yeah. Other than those two tiny things, this is a decent enough layout I guess. Oh, you should really think about archiving your older entries, it‘ll make your diary more organized looking and your older page won‘t be so cluttered.||15/20||
Contacts | email and notes. That’s it. ||2/5||
Navigation / Organization | It‘s pretty simple, but the wording on the links irks me kind of. ||9/10||
Errors | Quite a bit of spelling and grammar errors. Also some lazy typing stuff ((jus, deff, that sort of thing)). The layout looks error-free which is good. ||2/5||
Content | Day logging! It just about makes up the entirety of the entries here. And then, to top that off, it seems to be written for specific people. I dunno. It wasn‘t able to capture my interest at all. The writing itself was decent, as in I could follow it all and it wasn‘t confusing, but other than that it didn't have much going for it. Write more than today I did this and yesterday I did that. Delve deeper into the things you think about and what you think and you‘d have a more interesting diary here.||20/40||
Extras | Okay... well, believe me here when I say that I’m giving you the benefit of the doubt. I looked all over your diary for your extras and I’m including things that I normally wouldn’t. So, yeah. You have a link page, which is good. You have an I-mood thingy, an about me blurb thingy and loves/hates. Get more extras and I’ll love you better. I will. ||3/5||
Repeat Visits? | maybe. ||3/5||
Last Impression | This diary left me wanting more. Emotion and depth in the entries would help. Yeah. ||3/5||
Final Score Hm.||60/100||
Comments | Re-review... add some extras and write more emotional stuff and you will definitely be getting a better score. ::sorry its so low::.
Recommended Reading | It all blurred together and seemed the same in my head. Read one entry and you’ve read them all. ::sorry::
Reviewed By | Tink