11-30-04 | 6:46 p.m.
vickithecute
Name | vickithecute
Title | Short Attention Span Diary
First Impression | Oh bah. I dislike the colors... a lot. ||1/5||
Template / Layout | This just doesn't seem to fit together at all. The colors seem like they should go together, but it's just off, or something. And everything looks really cluttered. ((I think the cluttery-ness comes from all the little images residing in the side boxes.)) Also the crap at the bottom looks out of place... I'm talking the stuff that's tacked on after the main layout. It just doesn't look like it belongs. Also, what's up with the white scroll-bar? 4/10
As far as me liking this layout... I kinda, well, don't. The colors bother me and the crap on the bottom looks, just, well, bad. I do like the main set up, but the images and stuff cause it to not look as neat as it could. The headings on the menu aggravate me as well. Sorry. 6/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||10/20||
Contacts | Notes, guest book, and e-mail.||3/5||
Navigation / Organization | Shit is organized, but still manages to look cluttered. Bah, that is bothersome. Your archives aren't, well, archived, and the fact that they are centered on the layout doesn't look so nice. But, I guess it is organized, and that counts for something. Ya-huh. ||7/10||
Errors | I could count the over-use of tiny images as an error, but I won't. All your text links seem to work and I'm not going to bother clicking on the images to take me all over the place. So I'll just assume those work as well. Your spelling and grammar seem nice. And that makes me smile a little. ||5/5||
Content | I am having trouble becoming interested in these entries, not that they're boring or anything, I just can't relate so well. I find myself skimming a little and being happy when I find some sort of extra. I dunno if that's a good thing or not. 10/20
On the other hand, you do write well. You come off sounding intelligent, which is good. Very good. Your entries make sense and are, well, just simply well written. Yayness. 20/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||30/40||
Extras | Not lacking anything in this section.||5/5||
Repeat Visits? | I don't really know. ||2/5||
Last Impression | Your page and the content seem at war with each other, at least in my mind. Your writing sounds intelligent and well put forth, yet your layout seems childish in some ways. At least to me. ||3/5||
Final Score | hmmph. ||66/100||
Comments | Pretty good, I guess. If you really hate your review, come and re-request when Tink is feeling better.
Reviewed By | Tracey