12-01-04 | 2:34 p.m.
suchandsuch.diary-x
Name | suchandsuch.diary-x.
Title | i told myself i would make some changes; but the more i change, one thing remains the same...
First Impression | Something about this bothers me... Oh, I know what it is. I think it would look better if it was all centered or all aligned to the left... not a mish-mash of both. Hmmph. I dunno, there's just something about this that I'm not liking too much. ||3/5||
Template / Layout | Hm. The colors look decent enough together, I guess. I dunno really... the red and blue seem to pop a bit which is distracting. The layout looks spaced funny. Maybe you could try having the boxes lined up. The photo and little blurb thingy are good touches to personalize the layout, but I dislike the crap-job spelling done with it. Overall it is original, though. 7/10
Personally I'm kinda not liking this layout too much. The colors seem to light to me and the spacing of the layout just seems off, like I've mentioned above. I do like the little calendar thingy and the guestbook entry thingy. Those are nice touches that make me happy... but the rest of it... I dunno. I'm not diggin' it. 6/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||13/20||
Contacts | Guestbook, comments, aim, and e-mail. ||4/5||
Navigation / Organization | Hm. Well its not as simplistic as I normally like, but it's not disorganized. Stuff is pretty easy to find, but it seems kind of spread all over the page. I dunno. Its good I guess.||8/10||
Errors | Spelling errors. Quite a few of them, though I do believe them to be on purpose. Which makes me loathe them more. Just a personal thing... but I hate it. Grammar and links are good though. That makes me a little happier. ||3/5||
Content | I, honestly, could not relate. I think it's because I'm no longer in high school and don't really know too much about your situation. I felt lost a lot of the time about why your life is so horrible. I dunno. Your entries hinted at feelings and emotions that I am frequently dealing with, but even then I kinda couldn't relate to it all. A lot of the entries consisted of school-type gossip and the last one I read was entirely celebrity crap. I dunno. It didn't really draw me and I skimmed a few of the entries because I was a little bored with it all. 10/20
On the other end, though. You write pretty well. Your sentences flow and they make sense. You get your ideas and shit across, which is good. Decent enough stuff. 18/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||28/40||
Extras | Ya got a few. Good good. ||4/5||
Repeat Visits? | I might but I dunno. I hardly ever come back to diary-x diaries, so it wouldn't be your fault really if I didn't. I dunno. ||3/5||
Last Impression | It's decent enough. It seems to flow and everything. I dunno. like I said, decent. ||4/5||
Final Score | This is where I total up your points. ||70/100||
Reviewed By | Tracey