12-07-04 | 11:22 a.m.
starlit-lies
Name | starlit-lies.
Title | Deeper than you know... starlit lies
First Impression | Ohhhhh... pretty. I like it. ||5/5||
Template / Layout | Hm. This is a pretty design. The colors and image go well together and this seems to pull of the "gothic-ish" idea but still utilizes colors. A nice change from the black, red, and gray layouts you see everywhere. 9/10
Personally, I like this layout. The colors are very appealing to me. ((I love that shade of purple. Go you. And, that blue... ::smile::)) The links look a little off to me. Maybe having a contact page might fix that. Then, you wouldn't have so many links and they wouldn't take up so much space. Yeah... 8/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||17/20||
Contacts | Notes, AIM, and E-mail. ||3/5||
Navigation / Organization | Yay. Easy Peasy. Simple pimple. Ha!||10/10||
Errors | Minimal errors. Go you. Capitalization is your friend, though. Maybe you could use some? ||4/5||
Content | Woah. I am falling in love with these entries. I have wanted to write stuff like this, but it never comes out right. I was drawn in on the 2nd entry and read everything following it. My only complaint, update more. 20/20
I think you have the makings of a wonderful writer. You capture your reader's attention and use beautiful imagery. Some of the entries seem a bit dramatafied, but I think that's kind of the purpose of this diary, isn't it? Some may say this is angst-filled. I think it's great, though. 18/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||38/40||
Extras | Nothing really. But they kinda wouldn't fit in this diary I don't think. So. I dunno. ||1/5||
Repeat Visits? | Yeappers. ||5/5||
Last Impression | It's beautiful, really. ||5/5||
Extra Credit | +4 for writing the things I've wanted to say, but never knew how.
Final Score | Wonderful ||93/100||
Comments | Just, woah.
Recommended Reading | This is amazing. And this too.
Reviewed By | Tink