11-02-04 | 5:48 p.m.
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Name | randomness--
Title | ....random....?
First Impression | Green. I like green. ||4/5||
Template / Layout | I like the color scheme. It makes me happy. I dislike the fact that the page looks cluttered. Too much going on... like, there’s too much writing and stuff surrounding the image. ||15/20||
Contacts | Notes, book and e-mail. ||4/5||
Navigation / Organization | Simplistic simplicity. Everything is easy to find. I like it. ||10/10||
Errors | Ack. Your extras link doesn’t work... and I have issues with your grammar. I’m unsure why, but I have issues with it. ||4/5||
Content | Daylog. Lots of daylog. Daylogging is okay, if it‘s interesting..but I had a hard time following a lot of it. You do write well, though... which makes me a little sad, because if you were more open or something then I would probably be in love with you. I want to read about how you feel, how you think, and the stuff that irks you or makes you happy. Write about that stuff and I‘ll marry you. I will. ::smile:: ||30/40||
Extras | Yay. Extras. I like extras. ||5/5||
Repeat Visits? | Doubt it. ||2/5||
Last Impression You have a neat diary... Lots of stuff to look at and read. But I want more in depth writing from you... I know you are fully capable of being a super sexy writer. Live up to your potential. ||4/5||
Final Score | And there you go. ||78/100||
Comments | Hm. I lost interest quickly. Be more descriptive or more in depth about your emotions to capture my attention better.
Recommended Reading | Your extras were funny. I liked those.
Reviewed By | Tink