12-04-04 | 10:31 a.m.
pinkspice
Name | pinkspice
Title | Pinkspice - If Strawberries Could Talk, What Would They Say?
First Impression | I think it's cute, but there's a white border on the right side and bottom of the page which bothers me. ||4/5||
Template / Layout | Yay for super originality. Self-designed layouts rock my pink socks. Go you. The image, colors and everything else look good together. Well, except for the color in the scroll bar, what's up with that? Other than that, it all looks goooood. 9/10
Personally, I like strawberries. One of my best friends in high school was called Strawberry. ((She had pink hair and stuff... yeah, moving along...)) I might like this better if the links were a tad darker. They kinda blend into their surroundings a little. Other than that... niceness all around. 9/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||18/20||
Contacts | Oh gosh, could I ever stalk you. You have a bazillion e-mail addresses, AIM, MSN messenger, Guest-book, Tag-board, and comments. Gotta love the stalk-ability. ||6/5||
Navigation / Organization | Easy-peasyness. Simple as pie. I'm falling madly in love with you. Yay. ||10/10||
Errors | I don't see any. ||5/5||
Content | Hm. Randomness and day logging. That's about it. But, ya know what? I wasn't appalled. It didn't leave me feeling bored or anything. I'd like there to be more emotion involved in the entries. It would make it a tad more interesting to read. But it really wasn't so bad. Nothing really drew me in, but nothing made me want to stop reading, either. The last entry bothered me a bit, though. You came off as a little snobbish or something with how you wrote about the people at your bus stop. I dunno, maybe it's just the age you're at... but, and I realize I sound like I'm preaching here, but you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover... or people by their appearance. 15/20
You write pretty well. Everything is clear and concise. It could've been more interesting by adding emotion or humor, but, eh. It was decent enough anyhow. 14/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||29/40||
Extras | You make me smile. Lots of extras. Yay yay yay... ::tink does her happy dance::||5/5||
Repeat Visits? | It is a possibility. ||3/5||
Last Impression | This is a decent diary. I wish there was more emotion and I was left wondering about the significance of strawberries, but all in all, it was an okay diary. ||3/5||
Final Score | This is where I total up your points. ||83/100||
Comments | For a better score add some emotion or be more in depth with your entries. Other that that, decentness all around.
Reviewed By | Tink