01-18-05 | 1:30 a.m.
lostcookie
Name | lostcookie
Title | That's the way the cookie crumbles...
First Impression | I had a layout like this once... only in blacks and blues. I like yours better. ::sigh:: ||4/5||
Template / Layout | Simplistic simplicity. I like the color combo and the image. Everything fits together nicely and just seems to work. It may look a little better if it had a color scroll bar, though. It would tie everything together just that little bit more. Another thing that could be altered to make this layout just a teensy bit better would be to align the whole entry to the left, instead of just the first paragraph. Having the following paragraphs aligned to the right is distracting and doesn't look as neat as it could. 8/10
I like it. I have had layouts similar to this in the past... and they just seem so simple and organized and, well, just... good, I guess. I like it. 10/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||18/20||
Contacts | Notes & E-mail. ||2/5||
Navigation / Organization | Easy-peasy, simple-pimple. ||10/10||
Errors | Your diary is virtually error free. I spotted a few word errors... or maybe they were grammatical errors, but they were few and far between. So they didn't really bother me too much. ||5/5||
Content | Your entries kept me interested, but I didn't feel I could relate at all. I did enjoy reading them, however, and I liked that your entries were a nice mix of thought, emotion, and the odd observation of your day. It was all just random bullshit or day-logging. It made me smile, even if I couldn't really get my mind to wrap around it entirely. 20/25
You are a gifted writer. You mix emotion, thought, and observation in such a way that you can capture your audience's attention even if they seem to have nothing in common with you ((like myself.)) There were some spots where I felt like you rambled on a bit... but it was never distracting and it didn't detract from the entries at all... so I guess it was all good. 18/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||38/45||
Extras | I don't think there are that many... just cast and reviews. Give you readers some other stuff to look at... and pages that tell us more about you, but at a glance... like a bio or whatever. I dunno. ||2/5||
Repeat Visits? | Maybe. But doubt it. ||2/5||
Final Score | Nicely done. Sorry your review took so long to be completed. ||81/100||
Comments | I just have to say this... I completely agree with you on feeling better about yourself when you're wearing sexy panties and things. I think a lot of girls feel that way... it's not that you're wearing them to be considered sexy by anyone else... it's that they allow you to feel sexy just because you are wearing them... regardless of who sees them. And it makes those chance encounters with the opposite sex less of a thing to worry about because you don't have to worry about feeling sexy. Okay, I'm done. Ha. It's just that when I read it in your diary it reminded me of these conversations me and a friend of mine used to have on this topic... and I just felt like I had to share with you.
Reviewed By | Tracey