12-07-04 | 10:54 a.m.
jens-world
Name | jens-world
Title | You Can Get Drunk Off Milk
First Impression | Milk makes you drunk? Um--- okay... ||3/5||
Template / Layout The colors are decent and everything seems to fit together. The boxes look a little off, though. The picture box is taller than the entry box. Oh, and the font for the links is too big, maybe size it down by one or something. 7/10
As for me liking this layout... I'm kinda iffy on that. It looks decent enough and the color combo is nice, but I'm not liking the picture too much. Same goes for the wording. I'm hoping it ties into your diary somehow along the way or I'll just find it really annoying. Oh, and, in my opinion, I like the previous/next links following right after the entry... it just seems to flow nicer, but, yeah. I think they're okay where they are I guess. No biggie. Just personal preference or whatever. 8/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||15/20||
Contacts | Notes & E-mail. That's it. ||2/5||
Navigation / Organization | Simplistic easy-peasyness. Make me smile.||10/10||
Errors | Some minor grammatical errors, but spelling and links appear to be decent enough. A few spots in some entries have confusing wording and some have the wrong word all together... but that happens sometimes. Meh. ||3/5||
Content | Okay, well. Hm. Most of your entries for the past 2 months have been nothing but "I'm on hiatus" and "okay I'm back" type stuff. None of the entries really tell me anything about you at all. The last entry, the one about boys being human and having feelings like us girls do... I liked that entry. I have had those same thoughts and I'm almost a decade older than you. ((believe me, it never gets any easier to believe, either. Boys just seem so... I dunno, closed off from everything, ya know?)) I think if you focused more on putting your thoughts into your entries instead of day-logging and talking to your readers then your diary would be much more interesting. 15/20
You write pretty well, better than some other diaries I read. I couldn't tell from the writing that you were only 12, either... you come off sounding a bit more mature than that. Your entries seem to be written for the reader, though, and not for yourself. That kind of distracts from the diary a bit. Write to get your emotions and ideas out, not to please an audience. 17/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||32/40||
Extras | Go you. Plenty of extras. ||5/5||
Repeat Visits? | Maybe ||3/5||
Last Impression | This diary has a lot of potential. If you can open up a bit more and find a layout that suits you and your diary a little more, then this diary would be one of the better ones out there. ||3/5||
Final Score | Decent diary. ||76/100||
Reviewed By | Tink