12-01-04 | 1:34 p.m.
iluvnumba1
Name | iluvnumba1
Title | ---
First Impression | Normally I loathe red and orange. But, oddly enough, it looks good here. It does. ||4/5||
Template / Layout | Hmmm. This actually looks pretty nice. The colors all go well together and it looks clean and un-cluttered. The little chick-temperature thing looks a little out of place, but other than that... everything looks good. All though, the older page would be more appealing if it were the same layout as the main page... at least the same colors or something. It looks like it doesn't belong to your site the way it is... I dunno. 7/10
I like that everything matches. Right down to the scroll bar and image. That makes me happy. Personally I hate entries that are centered, they don't look as neat or something. And the older page being a different layout bothers me. Yee-ah... 8/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||15/20||
Contacts | Notes, E-mail, & AIM. ||3/5||
Navigation / Organization | Wonderful wonderfulness. Everything is super-dee-duper organized. Al the little headings over the navigation stuff. It's perfectly nice. Yayness. I love it when shit is organized all easy-peasy.||10/10||
Errors | Everything looks good, I think. Um, on your older page, the archiving is a little screwy. I don't like that. Nopers. And there are a few grammar type errors, but no biggie. ||4/5||
Content | Hm. This seems like mostly day logging with a small amount of feeling/emotional stuff thrown in. I wasn't really drawn into it, but it didn't bore me to tears, either. Which is good I guess. I think the reason I can't relate to well to it all is the age difference, but I bet if I was still a younger teenager I'd be drawn in. So it's all good. 17/20
These entries are actually written pretty decently. They make sense and I only found myself going, "Huh? What the fuck?" maybe once or twice. Your age does show through in your writing, though, and it comes off as if you are writing for your audience and not yourself. But that is pretty common among diaryland diarists...so yeah. It was decent enough. 17/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||34/40||
Extras | You got a few. ||4/5||
Repeat Visits? | I never know with these things. I might though. ||4/5||
Last Impression | My last impression, hmm? Well, it seems like this diary just fits together really well. Nothing seems out of place and it seemed like, well to me anyway, that your personality shown through in your writing. That's all anyone should really shoot for with a diary, no? Good job. ||5/5||
Extra Credit | Eh, I'm usually pretty stingy with extra credit points, but you get a +1 for making me like orange and red together in a layout. Go you.
Final Score | Decentness. ||84/100||
Reviewed By | Tracey