02-02-05 | 8:16 p.m.
fakebob
Name | fakebob
Title | [[---]]
First Impression | I love Vargas. I hate the color red. But I think it works here. The color red I mean, I think it works in the layout. Anyhow. ||4/5||
Template / Layout | This is the typical simplistic layout. I don't know how many times I've seen this generalized layout on diaries... But, ya know what that is? Because it works. It's also nice that this is a self-made layout. That always makes me smile. Simplicity at it's best. Nice color scheme... the whole she-bang.10/10
As far as me liking it... I do. It's a nice and simple layout and everything just seems to fit and compliment each other. One thing I dislike is the scrollbar. I always like the scrollbar better if it blends with the background and doesn't stand out so much. But that is the only fault I can seem to find with this... and at that, it's just personal preference. Oh. Wait. Another personal preference, I dislike layouts that have the entries centered. That works for poetry and shit like that...but I hate it when normal every-day paragraph-type entries are centered. Yeah. 8/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||18/20||
Contacts | E-mail & Notes. ||2/5||
Navigation / Organization | Easy-peasy. Simple-pimple. ||10/10||
Errors | Some spelling and grammar errors. I noticed a lack of commas in places, and some typos, mostly. Nothing really major, though. ||3/5||
Content | Your entries kept me interested and I think I read all of them. Yes, all of them. I do want to mention that I had the same issues with my period as you do with yours. Then I went on the depo shot, and now, no more periods AT ALL. On the downside, though, it did make me feel crazily chaotic and emotional for about the first month I was on it. But honestly, the craziness and emotional outbreaks were far better than the cramps, insomnia, and other shit that came from having my period. Okay. But enough about that. Some of your entries had me laughing and some had me sitting here shaking my head and telling myself that I couldn't have put it better myself. I like the way you say what you think and don't give a fuck about who is reading it. I did wish some of your entries were longer, though. At times I was left wanting more. Yeah. You are very opinionated, and though I didn't always agree with you, I liked that you were straight up with your thoughts. One thing I noticed is that you seem a older than I think you are. You're still in high school and stuff right? Or am I wrong? Gah. I dunno... you just seem to be at least my age (21) if not older. Yeah. 23/25
You are a good writer. Your thoughts and ideas come across clearly and you can make me laugh just with your straight-forwardness and the way you tell it like it is. I do think your writing may benefit if you slowed down a bit. It seemed like the typos and run on sentences were a result of just typing away and not checking that you hit the right keys and things. ((I do the same things in my diary.)) But, pverall, your writing is decently good. I like it. 18/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||41/45||
Extras | You feel no need for them. I can understand that. Sometimes they do seem stupid and clutter-like. ((Though my own diary is full of them, ::smile::)) I won't take away full points, because you explain yourself... but I won't give you full points either, well, because there aren't any extras. So there you go. ||2.5/5||
Repeat Visits? | Maybe. ||2.5/5||
Final Score | This is the first time I gave half points. You're special. ::smile:: ||83/100||
Comments | You seem to have a knack for getting your thoughts out there. And you aren't afraid to voice your opinions. That's a good quality. Yeah.
Reviewed By | Tracey