11-03-04 | 1:25 a.m.
dadagirl
Name | dadagirl
Title | her hopes get so high they're to hard to handle and she stares as they fade out of view
First Impression | It‘s grey. And it seems melancholy. It fits my mood tonight, so I like it. ||5/5||
Template / Layout | It’s really simplistic. A little too simple for my preference. It does have a niceness to it, though. Maybe you should make an extras page and a contacts page... you have a lot of links in your navigation box and its a little overwhelming. ||16/20||
Contacts | Notes, Guestbook and A.I.M. Niceness. ||4/5||
Navigation / Organization | Easy-peasy. All in a box that is self explanatory. Makes me smile. It does. ||10/10||
Errors | It all looks good. I think. A few spelling errors here and there, but nothing to cry over. ::smile:: ||4/5||
Content | Your entries made me think... which made me smile. It’s rare for me to find a diary that sounds intelligent.
I also found myself relating to most of what you wrote, and then I found myself kind of cringing over it because I was thinking that you sound like you complain a lot about your own role in your life. But I know that I do the exact same thing and I thank you for putting that into perspective for me.
Overall, you seem a lot like me... and it’s strange how easily I relate to how you feel about your home life, your employment predicament, and the college stuff. I enjoyed your entries, keep writing ’em. ||35/40||
Extras | I like extras... but I was left wanting more out of yours. Hmmph. You have some, though, and that is what counts, right?. ||4/5||
Repeat Visits? | Maybe, just maybe. I like your songs. ::smile:: ||3/5||
Last Impression You have a neat diary... Lots of stuff to look at and read. But I want more in depth writing from you... I know you are fully capable of being a super sexy writer. Live up to your potential. ||4/5||
Final Score | Go you.. ||85/100||
Comments | Keep doing what your doing. Don't give up on your dreams and all that inspirational shit I could tell you. Things will get better... they always do.
Recommended Reading | This is good. And this too.
Reviewed By | Tink