06-09-05 | 10:28 p.m.
crazyjaney.diary-x
Name | crazyjaney.diary-x
Title | http://crazyjaney.diary-x.com
First Impression | Hmm. It's simple & I like the car... but that's really all I think it has going for it. ||3/5||
Template / Layout | I have seen this layout more than once, but it's not all that common. Everything is laid out quite nicely and it's organized and simplistic looking. You do have a lot of shit going on in the menu area... so many links, Geez-us. At least it's pretty organized. The emotion-image-thingy at the bottom of the links stands out quite a bit though. Not really liking that, or the black counter thingy, too much. But eh, whatever.
8/10
Well, I'm kinda torn on whether or not I like this layout. The main image is pretty nice, but I'm not liking the enormous amount of linkage you have going on. Also I dislike the writing on the image, seeing as it blends in with the clouds and just makes it hard to read and messy-ish. Other than that stuff, I haven't got so many complaints. It's a decent enough layout I guess. 7/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||15/20||
Contacts | E-mail and guestbook. I believe that's all. Yeappers. ||2/5||
Navigation / Organization | Well, you are definitely not lacking in this area. I am appreciative of the headings you have on your links, if you didn't have those, shit would be confusing. And the fact that your archives are handled quite nicely makes me smile too. ||10/10||
Errors | Few grammatical errors, some typos, lack of capitalization... not too bad, I guess.||3/5||
Content | This part is hard for me. Usually I am drawn in to diaries where the writer spills out all her thoughts and emotions. And you, my dear, do that just fine. You put all of yourself out there for your readers and you just give of yourself completely in your entries. But, oddly enough, I wasn't so drawn in. My attention kept drifting and I kept having to pull myself back to reading. I felt like some your entries just went on for too long. I dunno. I love that you put yourself out there for your readers, its amazing how open and honest you are... it just didn't really grab me and pull me in is all. 18/25
For the most part I could understand your entries... but at times they grew a tad confusing. It seemed to me like if you just proof-read and make sure you are saying what you want to say as simply as possible that your writing would improve dramatically. Sometimes simplifying your thoughts greatly improves the final outcome of your writing. 15/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||33/45||
Extras | You got 'em.||5/5||
Repeat Visits? | Doubt it, it's just that I'm not really feeling it with this diary... sorry. ||1/5||
Final Score | Not bad.||72/100||
Comments | I started this review ages ago, then my computer crashed and then my boyfriend was home for a while... and I just never got around to finishing this up and posting it. I'm sorry for the heinous delay.
Reviewed By | tracey-face