11-11-04 | 12:08 a.m.
amber-yoder
Name | amber-yoder
Title | One‘s true self poured out for all to see.
First Impression | Dark and dreary. Weird image. I don’t think it makes me feel happy at all. Ohhh! pretty moon! ||3/5||
Template / Layout | Everything looks nice enough. I kinda dislike the image above the entry, but the moon is real perdy! Yay for moons. I do not like the scrolling welcome thing or the time on the page... they distract me. Oh, and I‘d also recommend archiving your older entries. You have quite a few. ||15/20||
Contacts | email, guestbook, and notes. Nice, nice. ||4/5||
Navigation / Organization | Easy as pie. Yay you. ||10/10||
Errors | Hm. Everything appears to be in working order. Niceness everywhere. Hm. I do notice a few grammatical errors. ||4/5||
Content | All your entries seem so dramatic. You write well, but everything seems so... I dunno, angst-filled. I enjoyed reading your entries, and I could feel the emotion and all that was put into them, but I felt like the entries were written more for show than for getting out your thoughts. Like you are writing for your audience as opposed to yourself. I dunno. It was enjoyable to read, as the entries are quite well written, I just didn’t feel like they were, well, real. ||30/40||
Extras | You’ve got em. Links to everywhere and quizzes and all sorts of niceness. Go you. ||5/5||
Repeat Visits? | Not in a mean way, but I doubt it. ||2/5||
Last Impression | Decent enough. I am left with the impression that you like seeming dark and dramatic, though. ||3/5||
Final Score | Decent. ||76/100||
Comments | A colored scroll might look nice on the layout... Um... you write well enough and have a good layout... yeee-ah. Looking back and reading through this review, I do find myself being a little harsher than normal... and I tried to fix that. But, as you know from my note and my email, I am kinda irked by some things at this diary. I *did try* to give an unbiased review, though. Sorry if it‘s not as nice as normal.
Recommended Reading | They all kinda blur together in my mind...
Reviewed By | Tink