12-17-04 | 3:13 p.m.

almusvenustas.diary-x

Name | almusvenustas.diary-x

Title | Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail

First Impression | Hm. Back in the day I would've had a design much like this on my diary. So I guess it's decent enough... at least in my own humble opinion. ||4/5||

Template / Layout | Well, everything looks nice and organized on this layout. A colored scroll may look nice, and I think the links would look nicer if they were not underlined and did not have the space after the first 3. Anyhow, this is a nice and simplistic layout and the colors give it a soft, comfortable feel. 7/10
I don't really like the words on the image too much. I dunno, they don't seem to make that much sense to me, but maybe that's just me. The image itself is quite nice and I like it a lot. Same goes for the color combo. Pretty nifty-noodle. 9/10
TOTAL OF LAYOUT ||16/20||

Contacts | Hm. I found: E-mail, guest-book, guest-map, and comments. Nice. ||4/5||

Navigation / Organization | Simplistic easy-peasy-ness.||10/10||

Errors | Hm. You seem to be error-free. Yay for you. Rockin my socks all ready. ||5/5||

Content | You day-log. But you do it in such a way that you include emotions and draw in your readers. It amazes me how so few people are capable of doing that. But, my dear, you do it well and it was refreshing to find such a well written diary. I found myself agreeing with a lot of what you said and being able to relate to the way you were feeling at certain times. You seem like someone I could know in real life and would be good friends with. In your writing you come off as a funny, sweet, caring, and open person and I think that helps to draw the reader in. 20/20
Simply put, you are just an amazing writer. You are eloquent and everything is easily understood and makes sense. Your grammar and spelling are impeccable ((I think that's the right word)) and just the feeling that comes off your writing is awesome. I think I'm in love. Ha.. 20/20
TOTAL CONTENT ||40/40||

Extras | Niceness. I loved your 100 facts. Yeapper-doo. Oh... yay! You have pictures!! And you're cute. Nice, nice, nice.||5/5||

Repeat Visits? | Probably. ||5/5||

Last Impression | You rock my socks. Oh yes you do. ||5/5||

Final Score | This is where I total up your points. ||94/100||

Comments | You are an amazing writer and your cute on top of that. Wanna get married and have babies? On a serious note, you seem like someone I would be friends with and you have an amazing knack for writing clearly and descriptively. You rock my socks. Oh yeah.

Reviewed By | Tracey

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